Update to my personal narrative


     My first personal narrative draft started pretty rough because I was so confused on choosing the right font for the words. I knew I was supposed to use New Times Roman but when I tried to click to choose the font, I saw two different "New Times Roman". I asked my friends to see the difference between those two but they said they don't know because they don't have that problem. The other issue that I had was to change the paragraph. The story that I was writing about connected everything into one big story that I didn't know where to split the story.
     After I finish writing the first draft, the simplest word to describe my personal narrative essay is hard. I thought I was able to fix my context after I finish writing the whole draft but it wasn't as easy as I think it was. I had no idea how to make my sentence fluency or word choice better enough for the readers to feel more exciting to read. I also forgot to highlight the word or the sentence which made me much harder to find the mistakes I made.
   

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  1. LoganSeptember 19, 2017 at 1:15 PM

    If you are having trouble with your narrative got see the teacher. Also the New Time Roman is chosen for you in the essay outline on Canvas.

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